This blog was completley different from the other blogs that I read. All of the blogs were about one sentence and one link. They resembled not much effort at all. I think that if he spent more time on it, or any time on it, it could have been so much better. It seemed like he tried to write in it every day.
WHAT WOULD BE HELPFUL:
~ more information about the source
~ a reflection about his group or what is going on with the project
~ more than one source
~ more on what his subject was
I looked at his post on the 17th. He posted the link; http://www.dep.state.fl.us/gulf/files/files/WaterQuality_Florida.pdf
After looking up this website I found it interesting that it was a paper about the water quality in Florida. I do understand that they share the gulf with Mexico but it might have been better if he found a paper about Mexico's water quality. It kind of said to me that he didn't look at his resource and it showed somewhat in his caption that I didn't understand.
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